Hi Tom,

Thanks for submitting. I don’t have time to give
extensive feedback but I’ll tell you this in all
honesty…your poems are sloppy. I’m sure you know
that already. Clean ’em up. Take some care with ’em.
Show some precision. I don’t know if you enjoy
eating pussy or not but if you do, treat your poetry
like a cunt. Make your poems cum! Well, I hope that
helps. I cannot use the poems in the anthology but I
do appreciate you taking the time to send ’em my
way. Keep working on your poems. You have some good ideas and insights.